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Lou Tamposi's avatar

I’ve not seen the haibun before — this was lovely and so evocative. Thank you; I’m grateful to you for helping me discover the form.

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Jenna Rozelle's avatar

It’s a fairly new form for me as well, and a fast favorite. I hope you find some pleasure in it, too.

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myakoushkin@gmail.com's avatar

Beautiful writing. Several places woke me up, are so alive with visuals I can feel.

Color, silence.

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Jenna Rozelle's avatar

Thanks for reading, Marion - so glad you liked it xo

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Jennifer's avatar

The final image, the shadow in snow photograph, brilliantly captures your words.

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Jenna Rozelle's avatar

thank you! it was the impetus for the den thinking, which turned out to be a supremely lovely thought space to inhabit in winter.xoxox

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Alex Kanevsky's avatar

Why make of things a purpose?

The euphoria of focus never lasts.

My favorite lines. Just to remind me what's what.

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Joshua Ross's avatar

I always wondered who else could distinguish a white pine from a red pine according to the pitch of wind in the needles.

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